Skirts Scandal Part 3
Thank you all for the continued support you are giving to this story. I am grateful. And your comments are cracking me up. Miss Polly, I must confess that despite the thousands of books I've read,...
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I hope that Bryce understands what his friends are telling him. But, really, I don't want to see him reconcile with Audra. She's seen his true colors already.Hurry back Queena !!!
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I love how Andy and Corum explained to the snobbish Bryce just how everyone on a ranch worked hard. Even women. Then they let Bryce know there were 4 big Barkley brothers..Bryce better watch himself....
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WOuld be sort of nice if the man would really open his eyes and change his attitude. If not...four big brothers can be a bitttt of trouble??? LOL
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Better to remain silent and be thought a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt.Great impression to be making on the young men of Stockton, Bryce! An idiot AND a mama's boy, all in one...
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I'm enjoying the pace of your story. This was fun to read. The dialogue was crisp. In particular, I got tickled by the ending: Do you know how many brothers Audra Barkley has?" Bryce had been...
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I love it...even if there's no trace of Heath....i'm wondering if you are planning to write a piece where the ryce family learn about Heath's parentage :-P
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I like Corum and Andrew; they are so down to earth. Yeah, wait until the Van Buren's learn about Heath. They'll send Bryce running back east where he will be safe. I love this story.
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You had me laughing and smiling all through this. I wonder if the Van Burens will survive Stockton!I really like some of Andrew's comments"He really is an idiot." sums up Bryce very well and I...
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That was a fun read! Those two are tying hard to get Bryce to understand but he just isn't inclined to see it their way.
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No doubt that everyone in Stockton will know that Bryce is an idiot and a mamma's boy. Loved the 'four big brothers' that the Stockton men taunted Bryce with. Now, we just need the four big brothers...
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Of course the Van Buren family has very little to do with the Barkley one but it seems they are going to meet and interact often living in the same town. I wonder how Bryce can have got those so nice...
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You weren't kidding. This was fun to read. Can't wait for part two of this chapter. You are very funny. I'm enjoying this story. Please hurry back.
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'Loved the description of Audra's brothers in the end! Too funny.
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this chapter was too funny...only thing would be better is if Audra's brothers show up...lol
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Excellent dialog, well paced. I agree with everyone - the bit about the brothers was great. Four big and protective brothers.
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Queena, so easy to see why this was so much fun to write --- it was great fun reading it. Must comment on part 2 as well -- Miss Van Buren had better be as careful as Mr. Van Buren: if she sets her...
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"Have we mentioned that you're an idiot? Do you know how many brothers Audra Barkley has?"And they're VERY protective... good god, man, what were you thinking!? Great dialogue!HUGS! Patti
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As you said a fun read - did someone mention they are BIG brothers!
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